Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Mae Concepcion's First Stop Motion




This is my first stop motion animation. One thing I think I did good on is meeting the basic criteria of a stop motion video. I think I did the placement of the picture/prop alright. I think I did okay on it, since I worked on it by myself. On my next stop motion video, if I do something similar to this I want to focus on moving the picture and prop evenly/straight. Another thing I want to work on is not moving the background of my video.

10 comments:

  1. I like your story line and pictures but maybe next time you could make it so the people don't look like they're going up and down.

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  2. I like the plotline of your story and also your pictures. One thing you could do on your next stop motion is to keep your pictures moving in one straight line.

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  3. I like how your story line and your pictures. One thing you can change next time is to keep your characters from going up and down and keeping them in a straight line.

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  4. I love your idea! Very unique! Next time try to make sure the people don't keep moving up and down otherwise great job!

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  5. I really enjoyed watching your video because it was very creative and I like your story line and pictures. Good job Mae!

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  6. You could have coloured a few rain drops at a time to show the rain coming down on the characters. Good job

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  7. I liked your characters and drawings. For future projects, it would be nice to see characters interact by talking or passing the umbrella to one another. Good job Mae!

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  8. Very cute, but I'd like to see a nice story-line between the two characters

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  9. I liked your drawings and the idea because it was very cute. You did a good job!

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